Gerrymander: Compositions

[Gerrymander]

You may not know this about me: I compose music. I'm currently taking a composition class, and I just recently 'acquired' a full version of Finale, so now I can finally export my songs as mp3s.

SO.
This first thing is a string quartet I've been working on for a few months. It's about 3 minutes long, and it's based on a piano improvisation. It's by no means finished, but I've at least managed to get a final cadence on the thing. I would love to hear your thoughts/critiques.
http://www.fandalism.com/index.cfm?songid=222622

(Bear in mind that these are exports straight out of the notation software, so they'll have little to no phrasing or dynamic changes)

[Bloodcinder]

You get to be half of my composition team when I ever actually finish an RPG.

[Seegtease]

Good song. You say you spent 3 months, but I'm a little more curious as to how much raw time it took. I agree that it sounds like good RPG music (which seems to be implied by BC)

[Gerrymander]

I guess it'd be more accurate to say it was composed over the course of a few months. I tend to work on things on and off. I couldn't really say how much raw time it took.